Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Paper Box Zelda]

Ah, there's definate improvement from earlier works. Actually, this was pretty good. Although, I got completely lost when the Fallout guy came in. I was enjoying the story, so it was kind of a bummer when it ended. I wanted to see what heppened next. x)

Cute, and a definate improvement. :)

JackKSchroeder responds:

Thank you very much! It seems that my ending is not that popular. I will work better on the writing for my next one.

[Tamagags - Siri]

Good one! :D

And why would we follow you on youtube when we can watch you here? :)

tamago2474 responds:

I am so glad you liked it and I upload more on YouTube so it would be better to subscribe there.

[MMD Randomness Episode 1]

Newgrounds is for animations and games. This is a slideshow.

This isn't funny. There's no music. MMD isn't really all that great anyway.

If you would like to animate something, please do, but slideshows are not what Newgrounds is about.

[Rojay (epi 1) .It begins]

PLease stop resubmitting the same thing over and over and over.

Submit it. Once.

Leave it up.

Enjoy your success. ...or failure. Whichever you get.

That's the way it works here. I've noticed that you've submitted this over and over, and the moderators have taken notice. IF they let this stay up, then I suggest you leave it up, because they WILL NOT let you submit this again.

Rojay101 responds:

fine by me as long as they allow it to stay this time. how can a series be successful if they continue to take it down with no reason, perhaps they need to reassess themselves and the way they deal with people. Now tell me something why would someone want to send the same thing over and over again? mmmm... perhaps something went wrong with the work or the site or in my case both.

The reason for it being resubmitted is this : for some wired reason my file turned into a video file with white screen and some persons complain that the clip froze the second time around and that is why i resubmit it in Swf; which i might add that how it was before the site turned my work into a video format. In addition is it not the same reason why a project system exist? mmm. to delete or unpublished unwanted files and to better organize the files. Perhaps they should allow a person the benefit of the doubt and allow them to organize. If that is not the purpose of those project system functionality, then perhaps this is not the site for me and perhaps i should just close this account and find another swf hosting cartoon viewing site.

[Zelda- Mole Mitts]

Ok, that was funny. xD

Contunued improvement on the drawing and animations, so that's good.

Nicely done. :)

Gawd, it's been a long time since I've played Zelda. :'(

artistunknown responds:

I'm glad you found it funny, and I'm glad that I'm improving. I certainly took the extra time to make things look nicer and make the line quality better. And you can't imagine how much Zelda I played while making this ;)
Thanks for the review!

[Dante Goes Fock]

For a first piece, it had a lot of good aspects to it. It didn't have much (any) story to it, but you're on the right track.

Go to my most recent news post for tips and tutorials that might be helpful, especially the tutorials. You've got the right idea, and with some training added, you could really do well.

Good luck. :)

PonyStew responds:

Thanks, pal :3

[Memphiston's Intro]

What you have is pretty good, but there's not enough to it. This is a beginning, but with no story behind the beginning, it's a beginning to nothing, and that's a pointless submission. Please don't submit "parts" to the Portal. If everyone submits parts and bits and incomplete things, who will want to come to Newgrounds?

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

Good luck. :)

[Sonic Title Remake ;)]

Please do not submit tests to the Portal. If everyone submits parts and bits and incomplete things, who will want to come to Newgrounds? This is a beginnning, but with no story behind the beginning, it's a beginning to nothing, and that's a pointless submission.

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/h elp-information/content-submission (Remove space)

Good luck. :)

[First time Dubstep]

Being new at Flash is fine. We all start there. Go to my most recent new post for tips and tutorials that might be helpful, especially the tutorials.

Anwarsaur responds:

Will do, tho could you tell me what i did bad so i can improve on those aspects?

[Short Madness TESTS]

Please do not submit tests to the Portal. If everyone submits parts and bits and incomplete things, who will want to come to Newgrounds?

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/h elp-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

MorkeHerre responds:

I know dumping grounds, but i wished to submit this movie to the movie portal because everyone thinks that i am a dumbass in animating and blah blah blah, so i submit this
I will not fuck the movie portal with lots of tests, i am working in one full animation right now, and when i finish, i will delete this movie
Thanks for the 2.5 anyway