Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Drawing "Carl Fredricksen]

Newgrounds is for animations and games, This is neither. It's not all that interesting. The music is nice, though it makes me want to fall asleep in my chair. This is best suited for youtube, or maybe a VHS tape somewhere.

MrWhahoopee responds:

Thanks, sorta'. The reason I don't have much animated things is because I haven't really gotten the hang of animation. Plus, once I come up with an idea, I suddenly get bored of it. I don't know what they call that... animators block or something? So yeah, sometime in the future, I will have animations. It's just hard, you know?

[Life of a Mushroom (TEST)]

Actually, that wasn't really bad. It looked decent, but it was way too short.

With that being said, please don't submit tests to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site.

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

Good luck! :)

[WATCHER]

This is really good.

But you need to specify that he's a butcher. In America, we don't eat dogs, so this aspect will be lost on many viewers. Add the comment to the "Author Comments" above.

[[FT] Iron Blue Intention]

Famitracker? Nope, can't say I've heard of it.

Noonetheless, Newgrounds is for animations and games. This is neither, and maybe that's why you've never seen these on here- it's not Newgrounds material. Sure, youtube is ok with these cuz youtube is for anyone to load up anything they want. Newgrounds caters to a specific theme or genre, and this isn't it. It's not a movie, and yet it's not a game either. Nor is it anything 'created' by you. You may have punched in all the notes or whatever, but in the end, it's a screencapture of letters and symbols racing across a screen as it does its thing and music plays.

Nah, I can't say that I like it, and the thought of more possibly coming this way does not fill my heart with joy. :\

[Lip Sync Test]

Actually, that wasn't bad. It was way too short, and having the little guy in the lower corner was distracting, but this worked. Being new at flash is fine. We all start there.

With that being said, please don't submit tests to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site.

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

Good luck! :)

[Layer Test]

Please don't submit tests to the Portal. If everyone submits parts and bits and incomplete things, who will want to come to Newgrounds?

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

Good luck. :)

jc9800 responds:

Ok thanks man, really helpful.

[No Crime Compares- iamsam]

Newgrounds is for animations and games. This is neither. This might do well on youtube, but this isn't what Newgrounds is for.

Add it to the Audio Portal if you'd like. That's where music goes. But as for being an animation, it just isn't.

[super powers]

Haw! xD That was a load of fun!

It was a joy to watch. The sound levels were inconsistant, so the voices started ok, but got lower as it went on., and the level between the characters were quite different at times, so try to watch for that and adjust the sound levels accordingly so they're even throughout.

Otherwise, that was fun! xD

brynimation responds:

Thanks for the advice and very kind review! I will try to work on that.

[Man getting Gas test]

It's probably not the compression settings, and it's not the file size, which shows 1.7mb; well within the limit. It could be the publish settings. What format is it originally, swf converted to mp4? What size was the swf before converting? I have no experience with Swivel conversion, but it seems that no one can get it to run. It's puzzling that MEANDNOONEELSE gave you a 2 on something he couldn't ge to run. :\

Clyphe responds:

I actually exported it straight from the Flash document to a .avi

I dont know whats wrong D:

[The Crawler]

It may have gotten 3rd place at ASIFA, but it has a good chance of getting Daily 1st here tomorrow. Well done all around. :)