Actually, that was good.
Why can't all 'first' flashes be like this? This is what they're supposed to be like. :)
Story and plot...check.
Characters...check.
Music and/or sound...check.
Humor...check.
While, I don't think it'll ever be in the top 50, it's still an enjoyable flash. :)
This was kinda good.
It was way too slow. "Who am I?" Walking... Sitting... Taking hat off... Sitting again... Candle... Taking hat off again... blah...blah...on and on. The video quality was good. The subject might have been interesting, but the pace was way too slow.
Also, it wasn't animated. Please keep the videos on youtube. Newgrounds was started as an outlet for people to post their animations. There's been too much video stuff submitted, when it's intended to be a flash site.
You've got animations on here. Please make more. But keep the videos on youtube.
There are also stopmotion films here on newgrounds, which we all know and love. Which is also not flash.
This movie was shot greenscreen and everything is edited in. Making the entire movie about 90% digital footage and animation, so I don't see a reason why this shouldn't be here.
This isn't bad, but...
...no, please don't store your tests here. This isn't Testgrounds. This animation was not bad. I liked it. The problem is that when people see parts and bits of flashes on here, then they want to submit their own parts and bits. If everyone put as much work into them as you did in this one, that might not be so bad. If they did as well as you did with this, it might not be so bad. But they don't, and we've got a lot of crap that get on here that shouldn't be, simply because people aren't sure what's supposed to pass anymore.
I look forward to seeing more for you. You've already shown that you're better than a lot of the noobies that show up here. Keep trying, and don't get discouraged if this doesn't pass. Tests aren't supposed to pass, but they do.
I liked it, but it's not enough to stay on here. Yet. :)
I hate it when people vote 5 on just anything...
...when it's flashes like this that are the ones that deserve them. 5/5 10/10
Absolutely awesome!
Long load time. :(
I don't know how you load these in, but the load time is way too long. The file on Newgrounds shows 974 KB, but it always takes several minutes to load up. My window says it's done loading, but the loading bar still creeps up slowly. This makes me believe that either the loading bar is not tied to actual loading, or that what was loaded was a redirector and the file is loading from elsewhere, not from Newgrounds.
Usually when something loads from a redirected file, it often means that the author doesn't have the actual file, and is stealing it from elsewhere on the internet. If you have the file, load it up here on Newgrounds like everyone else does. But as it is, the load time is way too long. Several minutes load time on a cable modem is unacceptable. I always give these a passing score, but if you don't start loading them in the normal way, I'm going to have to start giving lower scores.
Also, the words go away too fast. They disappear before the next line appears. Please leave them up UNTIL the next line appears. It would help greatly.
Hello Exedor, first thanks for your review. After I think you should not charge like that.
The file hosted by NewGrounds is a SWF file to redirect to the video. A video episode weight about 80-90 mo, so I cannot host them directly on my website. So no I'm not stealing anything and I'm a 100 % the autor.
"I always give these a passing score, but if you don't start loading them in the normal way, I'm going to have to start giving lower scores."
Do what you want... I think I don't have any order to receive from you that all, especially given the work that I provide.
It's very easy to sit down, click and cry if something don't work.
Dood....
...but it's Saturday! :O
:)
Video is for youtube.
Newgrounds is for animation. Now, you've done the Pyroscape games, and they're ok, cuz they're games. Animations and games are what Newgrounds is about. But for full video, please go to youtube.
And be nice to your reviewers. I thought you were ok til I saw you being rude to those below me. Now, not sure. :\ So remember: your reviewers will judge your personality by how you deal with them in your review comments.
I could explode on you and tell you about 10 ways that you are wrong, but meh, newgrounds has changed. When I submitted these flashes before they won awards and scored into the 4.00 + range. Ignorance is a bliss I suppose.
As much as I like Doctor Who...
You have to do more than that. All you did was take the video and run a filter. The NG submit page says: "You may parody existing Flash submissions, but you must use your own artwork and not rip another author's art." So, yeah. You need to do your own work. If you just modify someone else's stuff, it'll get blammed or flagged. :\
:)
... Good point ..........
She's got see-thru clothes!
How is this Suitable for Everyone??? Change your rating on this.
Awesome!
This is great. The medals are cool. But there's a glitch. I got all the tools, and all the weapons, and I missed 2 diamonds. It gave me 1 diamond at the end. I tried again and got 2 diamonds, and it gave me 2 diamonds at the end. I had a hard time getting the last diamond, but when I did, it only gave me the middle diamond at the end. :\ Several tries still got the same result, even after reloading.
=D thank you kind sir. All fixed now, I'm not really a coder by trade haha =D. Thanks
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