Exedor's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Test Battle]

Well, it's horribly horrible. It seems to work ...kinda, but it's still too basic, even if it was onlty a few-hour project.

With that being said, tho, please don't submit tests or unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished submissions, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

[My First Game]

Welcome to Newgrounds. Please don't submit crap. Also, please do not submit things you did not create. Submit only your own work.

[Escape3D]

Please make your games playable before submitting. please do not submit tests or pointless demos that are barely playable to the Portal. It is against the rules, and generally degrades the experience of the game, and the site too.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

[Free Medals]

This is spammy and abuses the medal system. I hope you enjoyed the 15 minutes of success, because it's all you get. You may have your account deleted because of this. If not, don't do this again. >:\

[Shadow Adventure Z - EPISODE 1]

Animations should be in the animations section, not the games section, y'know?

ShadicCZ responds:

I know, this is firstly. but thanks for warning :)

[7arp n]

The music sounds like Kitaro. :)

The game, however, wasn't. It's a template that hasn't been finished into a game, which makes it a pointless submission. Please don't submit unfinished items to the Portal.

[Sports Heads Football(Scoocer)]

If you did not make it, please do not submit it. Submit ONLY those things that you have created.

TheBluSniper responds:

hey hey does ng have this? no

[Explore]

Please don't submit things that come from tutorials. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

Templates are similar, in that they're a basic game that's already set up with code and sprites, but you then have to go and add your own touch to it before it's considered finished. Nothing was added to this, really.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

This looks ok and the controls work, but it should, since that's what tutorials and templates do. Other than that, there's NO gameplay value whatsoever, which makes it a pointless demo as well. This game has actually been submitted MANY, MANY times already, although each person draws different landscapes. Since it's a public file template or tutorial, it will be removed.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

Good luck. :)

[Space Shooter]

"...please don't rate"...? Sorry, but that's what we do here.

Please don't submit things that come from tutorials. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

Templates are similar, in that they're a basic game that's already set up with code and sprites, but you then have to go and add your own touch to it before it's considered finished. Nothing was added to this, really.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

This wasn't bad, as far as it looks ok and the controls work, but it should, since that's what tutorials and templates do. This game has actually been submitted MANY times already. Since it's a public file template or tutorial, it will be removed.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

Good luck. :)

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Change the name.