Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Racist Schmacist]

Yup. That's about it, sometimes. xD

[a new begining.]

What you have was really good. There wasn't much of a story or plot. Still, can't wait to see what finished items you have for us. :)

stormkill responds:

its a prototype test before i release my full project soon. i like your work to be honest. i look forword to your next upload. :)

[Exhausted Restrooms]

You had a good idea. WHere it fell apart was just after they made a run for it. After that, it go so choppy that I couldn't tell what was going on. Keep working at it, though.

raphapower16 responds:

hey thanks yeah I wasn't really sure how to work the camera angles. I mainly made this to see if I could make a animation at all. It was very quick to make. So now I'm going to try do better and take my time.

[[Motion trace WIP] Wolf]

What you have is ...weird and interesting, actually. It's not quite ready to be put up, tho. There's just not enough to it yet, and it's more of a test than a completed project.

With that being said, please don't submit tests or unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

Good luck. :)

GJYYNGII responds:

I understand.

[The operation]

Even in storyboard form it's good. Please finish it!