Exedor's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sheepy]

I get a nice picture, and a "Let's Fly" button that doesn't work, and a "Feedback" button that does. The pic is nice, but there's no game here. :\

AlexGoldring responds:

Hey Exedor, the game uses 3d graphics via WebGL, modern firefox and chrome support those, even Microsoft Edge does. It seems your browser doesn't support WebGL yet, sorry for a bad experience :(

[Shadow Adventure Z - EPISODE 1]

Animations should be in the animations section, not the games section, y'know?

ShadicCZ responds:

I know, this is firstly. but thanks for warning :)

[Sports Heads Football(Scoocer)]

If you did not make it, please do not submit it. Submit ONLY those things that you have created.

TheBluSniper responds:

hey hey does ng have this? no

[Territories]

It's not bad, but where's the replay button?? :O

RQDev responds:

Hey! It's the little circle arrow at the bottom right. Sorry if this was unclear!

[Flappy Poop]

The game's not bad, but it has too many ads. ',:\

8rlx0apps responds:

Yep.. Give me a second, I'll fix that.

[Rosea's Playgrounds Taster]

Please don't submit unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. If you don't know, it's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished items, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

HyperBobcat responds:

Oh ok. However, this project is being scrapped as I feel I want to try new, different things with the engine.

[Survive The Waves 2 (Stable)]

Isn't this a Construct2 Template? Or a tutorial?

Please don't submit things that come from tutorials. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

Templates are similar, in that they're a basic game that's already set up with code and sprites, but you then have to go and add your own touch to it before it's considered finished. Nothing was added to this, really.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

This wasn't bad, as far as it looks ok and the controls work, but it should, since that's what tutorials and templates do. This game has actually been submitted MANY times already. Since it's a public file template or tutorial, it will be removed.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

Good luck. :)

zchggf responds:

WTF Are You Kidding Me
I Almost Changed Every Aspect in This Game and You Telling me that i didn't add anything
Please Recheck the game before removing it

[TheFactory]

This is nowhere near ready to be put up. This is barely playable.

Please don't submit unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. If you don't know, it's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished items, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

hypnopunch responds:

My bad, one of my assignments for my finals at college is to finish the game and upload it to newgrounds. So i just wanted to test and make sure I know how everything works before it's due.

[Final Pang]

Pong has been done way too many times. It wasn't fun in the 70's, and this adds nothing to it. :\

Flyawayautumn responds:

Hey I think Pong is fun enough. But you're right about the other things. This being the first game I've finished on my own I'm just happy enough I got the game working

[Ljubo's Street Fight]

Please don't submit anything that only took 24 hours to create. This is nowhere near ready to be put up. this is not a game, and is barely playable. This same exact template has been submitted MANY times already, so there's really nothing original or interesting about this.

Please don't submit unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. If you don't know, it's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished items, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

vegiori responds:

Thanks