Exedor's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[the run of time]

Please do not submit tests to the Portal. This is nowhere near ready to be put up.

[Alex Meets Ally Volume 9]

In all this time, you have changed nothing?

[CubeSlider]

This works, but is nearly unplayable. The cube slides right off the sides when you use key controls. It makes it too difficult to avoid the approaching blocks and not fall off the edge. Speed of the oncoming blocks also plays a part in this. With mouse controls, you can control the character better, and would be better suited to this game.

[CubeSlider1]

You only need 1 version of this up, so this will be removed. Cubeslider (the other one) does work.

[FPS (WIP)]

This is a Cyberix3D template.

Please don't submit things that come from tutorials or templates. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

Templates are similar, in that they're a basic game that's already set up with code and sprites, but you then have to go and add your own touch to it before it's considered finished. You added nothing to this game.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

This "game" has been submitted many, many times before. Since it's a public file template or tutorial, it will be removed.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

Good luck. :)

[Platform Runner]

The screen movements are very jittery and that make watching and planning movements more difficult than it should be. Try to smooth it out. Also, he seems slide around more, like when landing on platforms, and thus, he keeps moving right off the platform and falls into spikes. The hitbox on the spikes it very large. Since he can't have his head go thru platforms, making the climb at the end of level 2 was annoying. The music is ok, so keep that. The controls, however; if you use arrows for left and right, why use other keys for up and down? Use up and down arrows for up and down. Don't ever use Shift or Ctrl, as they're system keys.

Keep at it. When it's fun for you to play, it might be fun for us to play. Never submit something just because it works, but wait til it's fun; which is the point of games. :)

[Glass City Alpha V1]

I got an error message:

The browser could not allocate enough memory for the WebGL content. If you are the developer of this content, try allocating less memory to your WebGL build in the WebGL player settings.

alalys responds:

Hi, thank you for your note. I have decreased memory size by twice. It should run now:)

[Little train dress up]

I know that's a Miku song; which one??

[Kabel Prologue Pitch]

Morse code? Seriously?

Kwing responds:

The game jam theme was "transmission" so I thought having the commands in Morse code made sense.

[Galactic Era]

I do not want to download something I don't trust. I don't want to have to register for yet another username and password. Why would I want to go elsewhere to play something that I should be able to play here on this site? Make it playable here, without having to log in.

zclnzy responds:

You don't need to download anything. Just need to register, we have no plan on integrating newground's login system at this moment.

There's no email bs, you just need an username and a password and you are good to go

Sorry and thank you for your feedback. :D