Exedor's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Luny]

This pointless demo is not ready to be submitted. Demos should be a sizable portion of the completed game before submitting.

[Windows FU (Windows XP parody)]

The best improvement is to never make another Windows parody game. Unless you have a way to return to the early 2000s when the games were worthwhile.

[Test on Construct2]

The character and backgrounds are good. There's nothing to do tho. Please don't submit tests to the Portal. With that being said, looking forward to what finished items you bring us.

[The worst FPS Game]

Actually, this is a basic Cyberix3D template.

Please don't submit things that come from tutorials or templates. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

Templates are similar, in that they're a basic game that's already set up with code and sprites, but you then have to go and add your own touch to it before it's considered finished. You added nothing to this game.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

This "game" has been submitted many, MANY times before. Since it's a public file template or tutorial, it will be removed.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own. And, make better judgements.

Good luck. :)

[Whites Only]

Good game. On the short side, but that's ok. How do you expand this, y'know?

I found an error. When you jump down and are between the first enemy and the wall, if you shoot him, he'll push you into the wall and into another screen. There, you fall, and get stuck falling.

You can tell who actually played the game by the scores and reviews. x)

Moderator's note: BTW, all inappropriate flags have been punished.

ninjamuffin99 responds:

It's actually the way I'm doing the knockback, where when you shoot, your X position gets added (or subracted) onto depending on which way you're facing. I'll try to fix this sometime today! And thanks !

[Ball Maze]

This is a Cyberix3D template.

Please don't submit things that come from tutorials or templates. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

Templates are similar, in that they're a basic game that's already set up with code and sprites, but you then have to go and add your own touch to it before it's considered finished. You added nothing to this game, except music that is abusively loud.

**And no, YOU fix the music. Don't expect your players to have to deal with your poor judgement or programming.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

This "game" has been submitted many, MANY times before. Since it's a public file template or tutorial, it will be removed.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own. And, make better judgements.

Good luck. :)

[FPS Zombie Shooter]

This is a Cyberix3D template.

Please don't submit things that come from tutorials or templates. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

Templates are similar, in that they're a basic game that's already set up with code and sprites, but you then have to go and add your own touch to it before it's considered finished. You added nothing to this game.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

This "game" has been submitted many, MANY times before. Since it's a public file template or tutorial, it will be removed.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

Good luck. :)

[Canterlot Siege 3 - Inversion]

Do not submit things you did not create.

[Idle Gangsters]

There's no game here. All it does is bring up a face, and when you click it, it takes you to another website.

drmop44 responds:

Works fine for me, takes around 5 seconds to load. Maybe the Newsground server hiccuped or something?

[the run of time test]

This is a pointless demo, and a duplicate of the other. It will be removed. Games should be complete before submitting. If you call it a demo, it should be a decent portion of the final game, and should be fully functional. Keep working at it, but this is not ready.