Exedor's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Abyssal Blade]

"The content was stopped because a fatal content error has been detected."

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[Restaurant Mystery Escape]

I told you that redirecting to your site, and spawning popups is not allowed.

[Space Pilpo]

After the General, it goes straight to the game over screen and won't play.

[Abandoned School Escape]

Your games often make no sense. There's never any text that tells me things that I need to know. How am I supposed to know I need to hit the white desk with the hammer? It doesn't say it's hollow. And items need a title. WTF is that? Oh, it's a magnifying glass. ...and that's either a razor blade or a silver eraser. Oh, it's a pencil sharpener. Oftentimes, the things we need to find blend in too well and are hard to find or see. Sometimes, doors are clickable and sometimes they have an arrow; please choose one or the other, but to have some exits be marked with arrows and other not is confusing and annoying. I've needed the walkthrough on every one of your games, and even then, I sometimes have no idea why you perform certain tasks.

Also, when I clicked the last door, it created a popup to your site. Auto-spawned popups are not allowed. If I find another person that it happens to, I will remove your game.

[Defender (unfinished)]

It's a start, but unfortunately, it's barely started. :\

Please don't submit unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. If you don't know, it's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished items, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Keep working at it, and submit when it's ready. :)

Good luck. :)

[Christmas Thief]

I like it, except that the speech bubble blocks the view of the person I'm selecting and moving. If you had the bubble go towards the bottom of the screen, it would solve that problem and this'd be great! :D

[Quick Skateboarding Game]

You failed the "fall off the world" test. It let me, and it didn't reset without reloading.

You set up collision detection for the coins. Why not for the goal?

[Demo of Jumper]

Two things...

First, please don't submit things that come from tutorials. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

This wasn't bad, as far as it looks decent and the controls work, but it should, since that's what tutorials and templates do. Since it's a public file template or tutorial, it will be removed.

This has been submitted MANY times by others before you.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

Also, please don't submit unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. If you don't know, it's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished items, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

kewlboy02 responds:

do you know where i can upload tests of a game?

[Biker boycott]

Well, the idea is good, but the mechanics need work.

First, add instructions in the game, not in your comments. Those are often off-screen when we play.

Second, there needs to be better aiming. Often, the crates fall toward the back of the screen, but the biker's in the middle. The bottles often fall in front of him. There doesn't seem to be any way to aim, and there's no indicator as to where the crates and bottles spawn, so hitting the guy is a gamble at best.

Third, if we can't aim, we need more ammo to start, and as the game plays. When I start with nothing, I have to waste valuable time waiting for something to come along that I can toss at the guy. I tried to play thru about 50% of the track, doing nothing while I store up ammo, in an attempt to blitz him before the level ends, but this too didn't work.

[Unity 3d platformer demo]

The concept should work, but there's just nothing to this game yet. It's nowhere near ready, which makes it a pointless submission.

With that being said, please don't submit unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. If you don't know, it's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished items, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)